Showing posts with label Week 9. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 9. Show all posts

Friday, October 23, 2015

Storytelling for Week 9: Radha and Krishna

Radha and Krishna 



Radha just started junior year of high school and was turning 16. “This year was going to be a great and momentous year” – she told herself in the morning. Radha met up with her friends. They caught each other up with what they did over the summer while walking to school. It was really like any first day of school. They saw some familiar faces and some not so familiar faces – it was a pretty big school. 

Being a junior meant that Radha would be taking some upper-division courses, which means that she may have some classes with seniors. Radha did not really think any of this. Until in her afternoon class a senior boy walked into her class and sat next to her. She could not take her eyes off of him. He had black waving hair and he smelled of jasmine. 

As the teacher of the class was calling out attendance, Radha waited and listened for his name. The teacher called out the name “Krishna” and the boy next to her responded “here.” So his name is Krishna. Radha could not think of a better name for the boy sitting next to him. Throughout the whole class they did not exchange one word. Radha was too shy to say anything anyways.
After the first day of school was finally over, Radha met up with her friends to walk back home. She used this opportunity to them all about Krishna. She talked all the way from school to her house. She really adored him. Her friends could tell how much Radha liked Krishna just based on her expression while she was telling them about him so they tried to give Radha some advice on how to them talking. They suggested pretending to need a pencil to borrow or needing help with the class homework. These all were good suggestions but it was a matter if Radha was willing to do them.

Weeks went by and still Radha and Krishna had not exchanged even one word. The longer Radha waited to talk to him the harder is getting the courage to talk to him. 

One day during class the teacher announced that she was going pair everyone up for project they must complete by the end of the semester. As the teacher was calling out the pairs, she said Radha’s name and to her surprised she also said Krishna’s name. It was destiny. This could quite possibly be the beginning of something amazing. 

(Radha and Krishna)


Author's Note: 
My story is loosely based on the poem "The First Passion of Radha" from the Coomaraswamy. Songs of the Love of Radha and Krishna. When first reading the original poem, it reminded me of a school girl crush. This inspired me to modernize the story. I kept the idea of how Krishna is superior to Radha. In the original story Krishna is a God this makes him superior to Radha. In my particular story I just made him into a senior which is still superior to Radha. She is only a junior. I also kept the  main idea that Radha adores Krishna. I just modernized it into a schoolgirl crush. I ended the story the way I did because I wanted the reader to make up his own conclusions of what happens next.

 "The First Passion of Radha" from coomaraswamy. Songs of the Love of Radha and Krishna by Bidyapati (1915). Web Source: Public Domain.

Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Reading Diary B: public domain Krishna

Although I really enjoyed the second half of Coomaraswamy. Songs of the Love of Radha and Krishna, it was a little harder to understand or translate. It was harder because there were more characters. In the first half it was mainly just Krishna and Radha but in the second half there are at least four characters. Having so many characters kind of confused me. I would get who is saying what mixed up.

Similar to the first half of the story, the second half had a lot of imagery as well. The detail and imagery set the romantic tone of the story.

While reading the chapter of the second half the story, Dalliance in Spring , I noticed that there were some rhyming. The rhyming helped to make the story more upbeat and interesting. I feel like the rhyming helped to make the story more fun and lighthearted. It also helped to make the song more well- structured.

Another chapter I enjoyed from this story was the Reunion after Wilfulness. From this chapter can tell that Radha is still deeply in love Krishna. The way she speaks, her choice of words, and the imagery she uses to describe her love for Krishna help to emphasize her love for him. One other chapter that I enjoyed reading was Reproaches, Lacak and Longing. In this chapter Radha defends Krishna. She defends why Krishna is her true love. She uses a lot imagery and detail to show how she feels for Krishna. From this chapter you can tell how much Radha admires, respects, and loves Krishna.
(Krishna and RAdha)


Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Reading Diary A: Public Domain Krishna

I read the Coomaraswamy. Songs of the Love of Radha and Krishna from the public domain of Krishna. These tellings were in a poetic format. Although I am not a huge fan of poetry, I really enjoyed reading the songs of the love of Radha and Krishna. My favorite thing about it was how detailed it was. It was filled with colorful imagery. The colorful imagery really set the romantic tone in the songs. A specific song that I really like was actually the first one: KRISHNA PURBBARAGA: The First Passion of Krishna. In this song Krishna describes his admiration for Radha. The length of his song really reflects his strong love for Radha. The imagery and details emphasizes his love for Radha as well. I was a little worried that I would not understand what I was reading just because it is in a poetic format but I felt I felt like I really understood it.

Another song that I enjoyed was RADHA PURBBARAGA: The First Passion of Radha. I like how they included Radha's point of view. It allows the readers to see that the love between Krishna and Radha is mutual. Although Radha's song is not as long as Krishna's, I felt like she loves Krishna just as much as he loves her. I believe so because in her song there is a lot of imagery and detail as well and I believe that they are reflections of her admiration for Krishna. Krishna is just a little more expresive than Radha.


(Krishna and Radha)